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3rd August 2014, 09:17 PM
#11
No it boils down to my laptop had to be fixed because it wouldn't save my documents so it had to be reset to factory settings, I'm re-writing a load of stuff right now 
Plus my girlfriend is going on holiday soon so I'm spending lots of time with her before she goes :3
I'll get it out soon, may take some time 
EDIT- Whoa, whoa I'm being an idiot I could release it now so why don't I? 
I can be a idiot
PART 6.4 Pieces
As the storm intensifies with thunder and lightening thrashing the grey sky, David is full of tears and anger but cannot approach Falon due to the handgun pointing at his face. Sarah lies on the floor motionless and fears for her well-being grow stronger in everyone.
David: Falon? why are you doing this?
Falon: For my family!
Razgriz: What are you talking about? are your family involved with Crinale?
Falon: Its none of your business plank, what is your business now is your deaths!
David: We can't improve if you don't tell us the problem! why are you involved with Crinale?!! TELL ME!!
Falon: BECAUSE MY FAMILY WERE MEMBERS OF OVERTEL AND THEY WERE EXECUTED FOR BEING INVOLVED IN THE CORRUPTION! DO YOU KNOW HOW F***ING ANNOYED THAT MAKES ME?!!! HUMANITY IS CORRUPT FOR STILL HAVING THIS SYSTEM THEY RUN EVERYDAY! ITS TIME I CHANGED IT AND BRING JUSTICE TO MY FAMILY NAME!! YEARS OF SLANDERING HAVE DEPRESSED ME LONG ENOUGH!!! ALL YOU BELMENDO DECIPLES DESERVE TO DIE AS YOUR WORTHLESS S**T KISSING THE DEAD F***ER'S EVERY STEP LIKE ITS LIFE SUPPORT!! THERE IS NO PEACE IN THIS WORLD WHILE YOU EXIST!! WHY? BECAUSE YOU DON'T TAKE ACTION!! CRINALE WILL TAKE ACTION AND EXTERMINATE THE VERMIN LIKE YOU THAT PREVENT PROGRESSION OF HUMANITY!! I... WILL... END THE SUFFERING!! NOW SAY GOODBYE!!!!
Falon pulls down the hammer of his handgun and takes aim at David, in a last moment of desperation...
David: You don't have to kill us though! we can work on the issues we have that are invisible to us but not your eyes. Let us coincide peacefully and we can clear your family name! killing us will only make it worse
Falon: I F**KING KNOW THAT, I WILL MAKE PEOPLE FEAR ME TO KEEP THEM IN LINE. AS LONG AS YOU BREATH I CANNOT HAVE THIS POWER!! ENOUGH TALK!! GOODBYE YOU SON OF A ...............
Suddenly Falon is struck down by a pipe to the back of his head knocking him out stone cold, Tarah is right there with obvious signs of anger coursing through her blood. Razgriz snatches Falon's handgun, disarms it and throws it as far away as possible.
Razgriz: Its okay Tarah you did it, lets get you back to Brandon.
Razgriz slowly escorts the shaken Tarah to Angelus's garage, as he does David turns rapidly and runs to Sarah. Clinging on to life she gasps for breath, David breaks into tears.
David: Hang in there now, the ambulance is on its way.
Sarah: I..... can't..........
David: Don't you dare say that, you're gonna be fine sweetie! You'll be fine
Sarah: David......... its to.......
David: NO! the ambulance will be here just hang on there *rips piece of clothing* here this will stop the bleeding
Sarah: David!....... please....listen................ I ........................... lo....ve .......... you
With one last breath, Sarah lays silently in David's arms. The damage was to great and could not be fixed. The head engineer of Wyvern AR has passed away. David enthrals with anger and shouts to the heavens. Everyone still present then you knew that Falon had ended a life. Just then the rain subsides and a sliver of sunlight shines into the stadium. Silence falls like a curtain.
There we are, my take on the omega harbour race is over. The epic conclusion is now due.
Last edited by Snakenator1; 3rd August 2014 at 09:51 PM.
Reason: fairly obvious
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