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22nd September 2012, 12:18 AM
#4
Your Fan-Fiction is pretty cool.
However, I think that in a universe with Anthropomorphic beings, they shouldn't refer to themsleves as 'furs' or 'furries' or whatever. For example, it is okay to replace 'Gentlefurs' with 'Gentlemen', because the words 'men' and 'women' are context sensitive.
EDIT: Prototype Panic Race 2 of 6 @ Time Index [HH:MM:SS] 00:00:33
Your character needs to practice his racing lines. Having a bad racing line is a good way to get yourself stuck in 8th place.
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