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    Default Faster Than Angels | Part 7.3

    Quote Originally Posted by Snakenator1 View Post
    I assume you mean a Prototype ship then in terms of class, if so then DO IT!!

    I love the concept of a "prototypes" because they add unpredictability in a storyline which to me is very good. Keeps readers engaged and want to read more, Plus the possibilities are endless with them. If you want to do a prototype class of ship then I say go for it.

    (I loved the prototype ships in 2048 if you couldn't tell)
    Yeah, like the 2048 prototype ships! I got the idea from your XAF-72 and Crinale's Project Apollyon, though I might have to edit the latter's stats so it's not so OP.

    Quote Originally Posted by Jonny View Post
    Naaah, I would prefer to stick with the FX400 league. Does it actually has any rules?
    It would do, yeah. It won't be like "here's an OP craft that cannot lose", there are regulations. It'll be like a combination of 2048's Prototype ships and HD's Fury class.

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    Oh! and before I forget, it is Friday, so here's another part!

    The referenced album title of Part 7.2 was Minutes to Midnight by Linkin Park

    [Part 7.3] I Care Because You Don't

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    Sunday, December 31st, 2209

    Omega Harbour, Perth, Australia

    23:57:48

    "Are you OK?" Brandon asked Gelorum

    "Yeah, I'm fine, I'm just thinking."

    "Oh? Of what?"

    She gave a sigh, sat there for a few seconds, then spoke, "Of ending it a-."

    BANG

    She was shot, in the right arm. With her left, she grabbed her gun and aimed backwards to fire, but...

    BOOM

    The shooter was faster, he shot her in the torso. She twisted away and fell back down.

    "Gelorum?!" Brandon yelled in surprise.

    The shooter then spoke, "She was too soft, she was not good enough for Crinale, but I, Tyler Pålsson, will take Crinale to new heights. Do you know who called in the attack of the second Omega Harbour race? ME! Not Little Miss SOFT BITCH HERE! As of now, I am... the new leader of Crinale Technologies! HAHAHAHAH-!"

    BOOM

    "Whatthehell!?" Brandon jumped back, absolutely frightened

    The body of Tyler fell to the ground, Gelorum shot him... in the... forehead, wait, what?

    "How... How did you survive?!" Brandon was confused.

    "Tyler is a bad shot, he shot me in a non-lethal area. Besides, I was wearing a Pocket Shield."

    "Well, I'm glad you're safe, Gelorum. Even if you want to take over the FX400, I could never let someone die."

    "[sigh], K-Kotova." She faltered, as if she wasn't sure if she should say that.

    "Eh? Kotova?"

    "My name. It's not Gelorum. That was a pseudonym. the name I use when racing. My real name is... Alexandra Kotova."

    "Really? That's a nice name, better than Gelorum."

    Fireworks started to explode in the sky, True enough, the time was 0:00 on the 1st of January, 2210.

    "Can we go before everything else tries to kill me?"

    "Sure, where do you want to go?"

    "Angelus. I will explain everything. I need to pay for my crimes."

    "Alright. Let's go."

    They got into Brandon's car, and drove off. as they neared Angelus' HQ, Alexandra spoke up, "You know, I think something did die in that river."

    "Oh? What may that be?" Brandon asked, intrigued.

    "My evil side. I'm done. I want to pay for my crimes. First off... [sigh], I will tell you the location of Crinale's base."

    "Really? You're willing to go that far?"

    "Yes, I am." She said. She stayed quiet for a few seconds, then finally said, "The location of Crinale's base is-"

    THUD


    Ugh, I really want FTA Season 1 over with, I've completed it, but there's so much content still there. Should I just upload it all every day until I've finished uploading the rest of Season 1? There's only 2 more parts to go anyway, but still.
    Last edited by Ace3000; 6th September 2014 at 04:32 AM. Reason: Major editing fail

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