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  1. 21st August 2012, 07:25 AM #2
    Amaroq Dricaldari
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    That was great! I'll give it a 9.5 out of 10. I would give it a 10, but it did seem a tiny bit confusing in the final paragraph, maybe you should seperate it into two individual paragraphs. This article is about Dual-Hull Ships afterall.

    Aside from that, it is perfect.
    Last edited by Amaroq Dricaldari; 21st August 2012 at 07:28 AM.
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