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    Default Part 46: Live

    12th May 2210

    New Jennter Enterprises Headquater, Berlin, Germany

    Some of the employees under Nico Bovier could be saved, many were taken as war prisoneers by the Russians and few were killed.
    These few employees were invited to continue working for Jennter, the jorney to Berlin was paid.

    "Aurora, you still look like in your 20s." said Jonny as he spotted the android.
    "Well, you didn't programmed me to age." replied Aurora, who reappeared after years of "thought-to-be-dead"ness. After that she worked at Jennter as a test pilot, her license to fly in League events ran out with the decleration of her death.
    "But you also look quiet young." added Aurora.
    "Science, eh." laughed Jonny.

    The main target was to ensure the ability to race in the F12000, also the weapon production was a priority.

    "Hey Nico, what about our...problem?" asked Brian.
    "Don't call her like that. You and Jonny are the specialists." Nico answeared.

    Brian went downstairs with Jonny, where still Madison's liveless body laid.

    "How about another try?" asked Jonny, but he already turned on the machine.
    "I'm certain that body and soul are divided." he phylosophed.

    It became windy, inside of the basement.
    "What is that?" shouted Brian.

    Nico ran down the stairs and asked them what happened, then he noticed the wind.
    It was like a force field built up.
    Jonny took a cable turned on the electricity and hold it where he expected something.

    Blackout

    Jonny, Nico and Brian were threwn back, something bright was in the middle of the room.

    "Nico you killed me!" it was Madison's voice, loud and angry, but also as if it was under electricity.
    Noone belived what they have seen, it was obviously Madison's self image, build from bolts.
    "This can't be real." said Nico, his facial expression had something insane, as if he was eroded from unlucky love.
    "It IS real, you fool." said Madison with a high pitched noise.
    She seemed to stand like a real human in the room, but she was instable her head twitshed.
    "Nico, do you see this?" said Jonny, noticing the headmovement of Madison. "All Madison's are in her!" he explained his thoughts.
    Madison threw her head to the right side as she heared her name.
    "They want to break free!" noted Nico.
    Madison's strange appearance splitted up in two other.
    It seemed like the colour of the light they were shining in represented their personality, there was a white, yellow and dark red Madison.
    The white Madison seemed to be good, but was very week, the red Madison literally absorbed her energy.
    The yellow Madison didn't seemed happy and looked hateful at her dark red self.
    She floated to her body and touched it, she began to get dragged into it.
    The red Madison tryed to stop her and also got dragged into her own body.

    Madison woke up with blue eyes, her natural eye colour, she starred at Nico who first took a look at her.
    "How are you?" asked Nico.
    Madison didn't replied and just stood up, looking around.

    17th July 2215
    Aaland, Denmark

    Madison now lived since five years in exile, although she publically regreted that she started the war, the German government still wanted her to pay. The war against Russia was won and every nation in Europe was free.
    She sat at the coast and watched her three little children playing at the beach, while the evening went to it's end.
    Nico sat next to her and enjoyed the peace, while looked at the ring at his finger.


    If live could be so easy...
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    Well that was awesome!

    Of better soundings now
    Wait, was that a Polandball reference?

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    Of coursings.

    I had the choice between "If live could be so easy..." (also with an "As..." at the beginning, but that sounded to sarkastig.) and "But that is not out world..." but for that I would had to write at least a half sentence about the world in 2215.

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    Default FTA: Curse of the Devil | Part 3

    After a few revisions, deletions, starting from the beginning, and restoring deleted content, here is Part 3 of CotD. Enjoy!

    FTA: Curse of the Devil - Crinale 2210-12

    >log03: 22100507

    Cafeteria, Sektor 8: CISS (Crinale Int. Space Station)

    Monday, May 7th, 2210

    12:09:11

    She walked into the cafeteria, sat down at the seat opposite him, then waited, looking at him until he stopped eating and responded to her. "...okay. Who are you, and why do you think you are important enough to intrude into my meal?"

    The girl then introduced herself. "I'm the lead pilot for the F12000, Lucia Scarlatti. If you don't want me here, I can leave."

    "Leon Turner, second pilot. But you knew that already, otherwise you would not have sat here." He replied back.

    "Yeah, I kinda knew who you were. Anyway, I'll leave now."

    "No, don't do that. While I'd normally be more than happy to send someone away, you just seem... different, somehow."

    "Different?"

    "Yes, not like common people. You're different in the sense that you go against the norm, against modern society"

    "Well... yeah, that's true, I guess."

    The two conversed for a while longer, then an announcement came from the speakers throughout.

    "Everyone, please move to the SeKtor 3 meeting hall. I repeat, move to the Sektor 3 meeting hall."

    "'Kay, let's go." Lucia said, getting up to go.

    ------------

    Meeting hall, Sektor 3: CISS

    "Welcome, one and all. I am Viktor Antonov, and we have some big news." He introduced the first meeting since becoming 'Supreme Team Leader', a position he made up, which was just a renamed Director position.

    "I have approved of 3 new AG craft designs for the new management of Crinale International. First off, we have this."

    On the projector screen popped up a graphic of a vehicle, which rotated 360°, To the side of it was some detailed information about the vehicle.

    CRINALE T9-CA5.008 GRAV-TANK
    >est. completion date: 2211


    Viktor then continued "2 of the 3 designs are specially made for the 5th World War. This grav-tank is one of the designs, the other is this."

    The screen changed to a different vehicle, changing the rotating graphic and the information.

    CRINALE I4-XA2.793 JET FIGHTER
    >est. completion date: 2211


    "And finally, the moment you've all been waiting for... and the one design I've had the most fun with!"

    For the last time, the screen changed, showing info for a more recognisable craft.

    CRINALE F0-RA8/00015 F12000 RACE CRAFT
    >est. completion date: 2210-11


    "This craft is to be created specifically for the F12000 AG Racing League, as we will continue to take part in the league after its change from the FX400. I can promise that this will be the best ship ever! All 3 craft will use improved and updated versions of existing Crinale technologies, so we should be able to complete them fairly quickly. The only reason the war craft have a later completion date is due to the fact that we need to make more than just 2, which is the number of F12000 craft that is to be built.

    "Now, this meeting has come to an end. Everyone should know what to do. Bring a new age of anti-gravity craft, GO!"


    Yes, the Sectors are called Sektor, it's actually just the romanization of the Russian translation of the word.

    Also, I'm assuming the war ends in 2215?

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    Why do you always write "romanization"? wouldn't it be "transcription", or "transliteration"? Neither Russian, nor English are roman languages.
    Anyway, the war... as always I don't plan such things, but 2015 should be the end (or earlier, before christmas )
    Sooo, Crinale supplies Russia with tanks and warplanes? Or do they want to NRF-like take over the country?
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    After these events everybody was stunning, Jonny and Brian were already arguing about their theories, but Nico just looked at Madison.
    "Are you fine?" he asked in an eucastic voice.
    "I think so." she remembered everything between Nico's visit and her awakening. "You two! Did I permitted to link me to this machine? God heavens, just imagine he didn't hold you back from cutting of my head!" Madison was angry, but didn't raged.
    "Come on Madison, nothing happened, you are here now." said Nico.
    Madison didn't turned around, but she thought so.
    "Please turn around, let me see your face." he said calm.
    "Are you stupid? I'm standing right infron of you and look into your dumb face." she replied.
    "Ehh, do you have eyes at your back?" Nico seemed confused.
    Before Madison started complaining about Nico Jonny noted that she seemed to look at him.
    "Am I surrounded by trolls, I can clearly see Nico's curious face, his blonde hair and blue eyes." the argument that Madison knew all these things just from her mind was invaild as she was gesturing with her hand. She noticed that something was wrong as she pointed in Nicos face, but didn't have seen her own hand.
    "What have you done with me? Am I invisible?" she said.
    Jonny had an idea "How about you go up to that door."
    Madison felt like she did, but her body walked against a wall, as she turned around she noticed herself lying on the ground infront of her viewpoint she realised what happened. "Oh no, seems like I left my body for the second I turned around."
    Madison's ghost form was still existing through electricity, but not as powerful as before. As she touched her body, she was in it again.
    "May you should train your abilities, it's defenitely an adventage over us - normal humans." said Nico.
    Madison realised that, her eyes turned red and she went out of the room.

    "Well done, to all of us, we brought the number 1 enemy of our nation, directly into it's capital. Again applause." said Jonny, more sarcastic than usual, maybe because he realised that they are fault.
    Nico ran after her.
    "The thing is, if she leaves her body, she is almost immortal, only electricity could kill her. She would need to practise to stabilise that state, that's what Nico just recommended her." said Brian.
    "And the Emperor gave that guy a medal for archievments for the German fatherland." added Jonny laughing.


    Madison went into Jana's office, she was like always doing paperwörk.
    As she raised her head and looked into Madison's red eyes, she only said "What do you want?"
    Madison laughed and went even closer to Jana. "I hate you since we were young, but I still need you for something else."
    She turned around and closed the doors.
    "You know how we french people do it. You may laugh about our weak fighting abilities, but in the end, we - win - always."
    "You want a peace treaty, never, it's against basic physics to lose against you frenchies." said Jana arrogantly.
    "Oh Jana, I thought you are usually so peaceful, why do you not stop the dying on the front by just setting your autograpth on this piece of paper." Madison said this very slowly and in a way everybody hates it. She took out her tab and gave it Jana.
    She only threw it away "I rather die, fighting on the front, in the air, or even here!"
    "Let's see if your beloved Emperor is showing the same attitude, so now, things get personally." Madison said formal.
    Jana had hanging two swords at the wall of her office, Madison took both and threw one to Jana.

    "I, President Madison Larough, challenge you, Reichschanzellor Jana von Bovier, to a duell, of live - and death."

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    Ohh it's getting real

    Quote Originally Posted by Jonny View Post
    Why do you always write "romanization"? wouldn't it be "transcription", or "transliteration"? Neither Russian, nor English are roman languages.
    It's actually the same thing:
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Romanization
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Romanization_of_Russian

    The English language uses the Latin/Roman alphabet

    Quote Originally Posted by Jonny View Post
    2015 should be the end (or earlier, before christmas )
    Wait...

    Quote Originally Posted by Jonny View Post
    Sooo, Crinale supplies Russia with tanks and warplanes? Or do they want to NRF-like take over the country?
    No, and no. Let me explain:

    No, Crinale do not supply Russia with their tanks and jet fighters, they are battling with their own pilots, not with the Russian Air Force. However, they are on the side of the Russians. In other words, Russia effectively have two different forces fighting for them: The Armed Forces of the Russian Empire, and Crinale.

    And no, Crinale do not want to take over the world. Their primary objective is to make the AG Racing Commission Overtel 2.0.

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    Ok, I'm pretty sure that the Russian Tsar would give the captured stuff from Jennter to Criale ^^

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    I could easily work that into the plot, have Crinale obtain Jennter's tech from the Tzar, reverse engineer it, and implement them into the various craft being built.

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    Let's do it like when the Jennter guys came to Brandon and showed him his plans to recapture Jennter from Henry. First you write and then I check.

    Also I made a basic Bovier family tree, things still don't fit and I found mistakes in the plot.
    Nico and Jana are in the 8th generation after Jonny and his great-great-great-great-great-grandchildren
    Still I need to work around with birthdates, Nico and Jana are both in their mid-20s, last version resulted in birthdates for them at the end of the 2180s.

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    Okay! I'm also writing out an FTA part (which means it'll be in 2212) that'll involve Jonny Bovier. I'm sure you'll love it, but you won't see it for a while (for obvious reasons).

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