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    Default Faster Than Angels | Part 2.0

    English kinda sucks like that, haha!

    Anyhoo, Before we begin, I'd like to post the final theme songs I have chosen for the teams

    Theme of Angelus - Transparency | Hiroshi Okubo
    Theme of Crinale - Ransom | Pendulum

    Anyway, let's now move on to...
    [Part 2.0] Scary Weapons and Neat Logic

    <22091016>
    Monday, October 16th, 2209

    Angelus R&D Headquarters, Perth, Australia

    19:56:43

    One very tired Brandon Smith was looking at reports and data files, comparing them, trying to connect the evidence and figure out what exactly Crinale's true motives were. At that point, two things happened, almost at the exact same time. The first was an email that Brandon was expecting had finally arrived in his inbox. Before he could open it, though, the second thing happened. A knock on his office door.

    "Urgh, come in." He moaned, as he quickly and swiftly minimized everything from his computer's screen. In through the door walked Tarah Andrews, the lead pilot for Angelus' AG Racing Division.

    "Sorry, I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to disturb you, boss, but we need to talk. I think you might know why." she spoke, with fear in her voice. Brandon gestured wordlessly to a chair on the other side of his desk. He waited, silently, until she sat down, then after a few moments, he pushed his glasses up the bridge of his nose, then spoke.

    "What seems to be the problem, is everything alright?" he inquired.

    "I don't think I can race tomorrow. OK, no. I can race, but I don't want to."

    "Why not? You are the best pilot we have, I've seen your skills first han-"

    "No." she quickly interrupted. "This is not about my skills, at least, not anymore."

    Brandon thought for a second. "I think this conversation would move faster and more efficiently if you gave your reasons why you cannot race."

    "Do you know what happened on Friday?"

    "Yes. Crinale happened. They 'attacked' the Race Commission's headquarters, however, that plan backfired. I'm still waiting for the fine details, though. I'm supposed to be getting a report."

    "OK. So do you know what their demands were?"

    "A prototype weapon, something that can cause instant eliminations... wait," His eyes widened with realisation, "Is that why you don't want to race?"

    "Yes. If they have that weapon against us, then no amount of skill will be able to avoid their attacks. We'd be eliminated on the spot... maybe even killed!"

    Brandon opened one of his minimized files, studied it for a good minute, then turned his attention back to Tarah. "They can't use it. That would require extensive knowledge of the Race Commission's weapon systems, knowledge that no one except for the designers of the system has. They can even have the weapon itself onboard their ship, armed and ready to destroy anyone who stands in their way, but... without the system's acknowledgement of the weapon as... well, as a weapon, it will not work."

    "Are you sure?"

    "Yes," Brandon said, scanning the open file once more. "The system will not allow the weapon to work. I think they knew that, which is why they went to the Race Commission in the first place, to gain permission to use it. The result of that plan, however, is the result of what transpired on the 13th."

    Tarah gave a long sigh of relief. "Thanks Boss! I'm gonna go train! I have to beat Crinale." She jumped up and nearly ran out the door.

    "I'm glad you're back to your eager, happy self, but remember, don't train too hard, you don't want to strain yourself"

    "I know!" She said, closing the door behind her. After Tarah left Brandon pulled up all the minimized files, then opened the email:

    |Monday, October 16th, 2209
    |
    |Sender: <alpha.0@xŵƮŞƽЃь.∂∞ⅎΓ>
    |To: <brandon.smith@angelus-rd.com.au>
    |Subject: 22091013: _||-
    |Attachments: ];{+_)O^!(@&%$~`.zip
    |
    ||?}{:@?}))#!)&R&)@^*9`098/'\.;.//
    |
    |//
    |<<
    |>>
    |<!--
    |Sorry about all that garbage there, I just did not want to get caught. I am trying to hide from Crinale, no doubt
    |they would be looking for me after that stunt I pulled, haha! So, I've encrypted this email.
    |
    |Anyway, onto business. Attached is a zipped folder containing the finer details of everything that occurred on
    |the 13th. You should know what the password is.
    |
    |That's it for now, I need to lay low for a while, so try to not contact me.
    |
    |
    |1:10-26
    |-->
    |
    |alpha.0

    Brandon figured out the code instantly. the text at the end signified that the password was contained in the first line, consisting of the 10th to 26th characters on that line. He opened the zip file then input the password: "#!)&R&)@^*9`098/". Upon entering the password, the file proceeded to decompress itself onto his computer. He found the one thing that would be most helpful, a file with a familiar name: "CZf_12"

    'This must be Crinale's super weapon.' He thought. Opening it revealed that he was correct. He had just opened Crinale's blueprints to their super weapon, the CZf_12 Prototype Energy Blaster, but something about it was off, like he had seen something very similar before. He brought up file after file, but he could not find any similarities between them and the weapon. Then he found it, staring him in the face...

    An image. Of an F9000 Super Weapon. Auricom's Orbital Laser.

    He immediately started searching for the blueprints for the Orbital Laser, but considering that it was secret technology, it would be a challenge to find anything to do with it. Finally, however, Brandon found himself staring at the one thing he so desperately needed to find the truth. He scanned the both the blueprints for the Orbital Laser and the Energy Blaster for a match, he was only hoping that his hunch was wrong. However, the scan returned a complete match for the inner workings of the two technologies.

    Finally, he realised what he had discovered, and his mind started to piece everything together... bit by bit...

    <<--INNER MONOLOGUE: REVISUALIZATION-->>

    "-> Crinale was discovered in Russia, stealing Tigron parts...
    -> They are entirely based on combat...
    -> They have an unhealthy obsession with destruction...
    -> Their special weapon's technology matches that of Auricom's Orbital Laser...
    THEREFORE!

    -->_Crinale stole the remnants of an Orbital Laser, and reverse engineered it for their own benefit! So why do they have such an unhealthy obsession with the F9000? First Tigron parts, now the Orbital Laser?
    THAT'S IT!

    -->_Crinale are trying to recreate the F9000!... but... why? They have money... No... really? It's the only logical explanation... WOAH!


    -->_CRINALE TECHNOLOGIES INCORPORATED HAS AN ULTERIOR MOTIVE..."
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    I'm on the edge of my seat after reading that, just my face was 0.0 WOW

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    Glad you liked it! ^_^

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    This is aweasome

    And since Snake already wrote a part about his team...can I do the same?
    This could turn into something like a RPG ^^
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    If you want, go for it!

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    This whole thing will be awesome

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    Post Part 1: RE: Anti-Gravity Racing

    ----Faster Than Angels----
    A Mystic Life of Speed

    Jennter Enterprises Headquaters
    Copenhagen, Denmark, European Federation
    21st June 2209


    A huge hall was filled by members of the press, trying to catch any word said by the people of interest.
    These people were three members of the unfamous Bovier family, a clan that currently leads the world's richest and most influental multinational company: Jennter Enterprises. Furthermore, sprouses of the Bovier family are spread all over the world and are as widespread in all areas of the everyday life in the 23rd century, as the arms of the company they lead.
    Jennter Enterprises itself originated from a once small Formula One team and then expanded over the car market to various other vehicular areas until it entered the reignited space race of the 2050s.


    Centered, at the end of the room set an old man at a table on a podium. Next to him, his younger decendants.
    "I admit, I already feel nostalgic before I made my announcement." the old man speaking was Jonathan Bovier, who lived for 211 years now and was ever since the Founder and President of Jennter Enterprises. He made a moody appearance, tended to be rough, but in his nature, he was good.
    "From this day on, I will retire from my position as the President of Jennter Enterprises, all our past and future successes are lying from now on in the hands of my sprouse, Jana Bovier." the old man announced, followed by grasps and applause.

    The young Bovier was only 24 years old, but smiled with pride as her ancestor said her name loudly "Thanks a lot, Jonathan."
    She was a mature person, her appearance was proud, but not too proud, she was confident, but not over-convident.

    On the other side of Jonathan sat Nico Bovier, the two years older brother of the just-declared new President of the world's most famous company.
    Nico took the role of the team's top pilot and just debuted in the FX400 Anti-Gravity Racing League season of 2209. Like everyone else in the room, he wished Jana luck.


    After the press conference, the three Boviers left the hall.
    "Why this sudden retirement, did something happen?" asked Jana the former President.
    "Well, it's nothing that you need to know at the given time, just various past things coming up again." Jonathan quickly noted and tried to evade any further questions of Jana.
    "That was weird." she sighted as Jonathan hurried away.
    Nico witnessed this occurance "Well, he is a special man. Someone of his caliber certainly got a lot of important businesses."
    "Maybe that's why he retired." thought Jana.
    "Maybe it's a woman." laughed her brother jokingly.

    "It seems like we finally see Bovier weak." whispered a mysterious woman, who followed the conversation secretly.
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    Part 2: Investigating a mystery

    The sunsets over the Wyvern AR HQ, the airfield of all Wyvern projects is under heavy surveillance to protect the XAF-72 Wyvern from falling into the hands of the unknown assailant who attacked two days ago. A light on the side of the building slowly rises to the top floor. David is in the elevator heading to his office, with a cup of coffee in his hands. He steps in and logs onto his computer, watching CCTV footage captured during the loss of the precious Wyvern warp, trying to identify the attacker.

    "Argh his face is black, I need a miracle to identify this guy"

    David flicks through documents of the Wyvern warp which was stolen, trying to piece how anyone could of known about the top secret project. Somebody knocks and enters the office. Its Sarah of the engineer team.

    Sarah: How you holding up?
    David: Its no use, I just cannot find this guy's identity. I'm troubled by nightmares as to who he is.
    Sarah: Well I hate to bring bad news but *a long deep breath* but he took the activation chip as well.
    David: So this guy can activate the warp drive. Dammit, we need to act fast.
    ????: You never did tell us what the warp did though?
    David+Sarah: HUH?

    Walks in Falon tired from the days practice on the training circuits.

    Falon: Sorry to surprise you guys, but what does the warp do?
    Sarah: I don't know, I just followed the blueprints given to us by David.
    David: I guess now is best telling you. The warp is the ultimate means of travel, despite its name it is also actually a new form of AG technology. Complete External Force Nullification Device or CEFND for short. It completely negates the affects of external forces such as air resistance, gravity and even energy such as heat and light. This warp offers optical camouflage and ultimate engine efficiency. Its also capable of light speed as the name suggested as well.
    Falon: That's what it is, wow that's amazing!
    David: Yes but now its in the wrong hands and I'm scared for it.
    Sarah: David its okay I have good news as well.
    David: Really? please speak up.
    Sarah: Although it isn't the blueprints, I added special software into the warp that only it and the XAF-72 have. A security program, meaning if the warp is not to be in the Wyvern it won't activate. Think of it as a safety feature.
    David: SARAH YOU ARE BRILLIANT! this means if our attacker wants to use it he'll have to get through us to the XAF first!
    Falon: That could be dangerous though, what if he has a team and completely levels us. We'll lose the whole team.
    David: I know, I need to think.
    Sarah: We'll leave then, goodnight David

    Falon and Sarah leave the office. David continues his search through the footage at the time of the attack. However as he loses hope, he clicks onto the CCTV in the engineer locker room. The assailant is in there! David widens his eyes to find how the unknown man infiltrated the facility. Through the air vents into the locker room, best of all is the blurred face of the man. Not wanting to wait David runs a resolution scan to identify the assailant. What he discovers shocks him...
    Davids brother Shaun is the attacker. A man David who he thought was in jail for his past crimes. It seems he escaped, and is wearing Crinale uniforms. The ultimate betrayal, Shaun stole the warp for Crinale. David rushes through his keyboard to send emails to the AGRC racing commission and Angelus. To warn them of the new danger of Davids brother and the Wyvern CEFND he stole. Now the fear of having the XAF-72 stolen encapsulates David's body.

    "If they get their hands on the Wyvern, they can turn it into a weapon. Near enough teleporting from location to location, attack cities and homes and disappear instantly without a trace. With the optical camouflage technology and the speed enhancements to the engine. A weaponised XAF-72 Wyvern would be unstoppable. Crinale could rule the world!"

    David completes the message to the AGRC commission and Angelus, detailing what he now believes to be the intentions of Crinale. To steal the XAF-72 Wyvern and turn it into a weapon to crush their opposition who stand in the way. Its only a matter of time before this plot could be a reality. David sends the email, terrified of the future.

    Hope you guys liked that instalment, also Jonny I really liked yours. Very original
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    Woah, those were awesome, I loved it!

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    Glad you liked, it was tricky to make a part that was as suspenseful as yours. I think I did alright there
    Things are taking a dark turn in these fictions, I hope your next part Ace can work with my part 2
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