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    Default Part 46: Live

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    Well that was awesome!

    Of better soundings now
    Wait, was that a Polandball reference?

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    Of coursings.

    I had the choice between "If live could be so easy..." (also with an "As..." at the beginning, but that sounded to sarkastig.) and "But that is not out world..." but for that I would had to write at least a half sentence about the world in 2215.

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    Default FTA: Curse of the Devil | Part 3

    After a few revisions, deletions, starting from the beginning, and restoring deleted content, here is Part 3 of CotD. Enjoy!

    FTA: Curse of the Devil - Crinale 2210-12

    >log03: 22100507

    Cafeteria, Sektor 8: CISS (Crinale Int. Space Station)

    Monday, May 7th, 2210

    12:09:11

    She walked into the cafeteria, sat down at the seat opposite him, then waited, looking at him until he stopped eating and responded to her. "...okay. Who are you, and why do you think you are important enough to intrude into my meal?"

    The girl then introduced herself. "I'm the lead pilot for the F12000, Lucia Scarlatti. If you don't want me here, I can leave."

    "Leon Turner, second pilot. But you knew that already, otherwise you would not have sat here." He replied back.

    "Yeah, I kinda knew who you were. Anyway, I'll leave now."

    "No, don't do that. While I'd normally be more than happy to send someone away, you just seem... different, somehow."

    "Different?"

    "Yes, not like common people. You're different in the sense that you go against the norm, against modern society"

    "Well... yeah, that's true, I guess."

    The two conversed for a while longer, then an announcement came from the speakers throughout.

    "Everyone, please move to the SeKtor 3 meeting hall. I repeat, move to the Sektor 3 meeting hall."

    "'Kay, let's go." Lucia said, getting up to go.

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    Meeting hall, Sektor 3: CISS

    "Welcome, one and all. I am Viktor Antonov, and we have some big news." He introduced the first meeting since becoming 'Supreme Team Leader', a position he made up, which was just a renamed Director position.

    "I have approved of 3 new AG craft designs for the new management of Crinale International. First off, we have this."

    On the projector screen popped up a graphic of a vehicle, which rotated 360°, To the side of it was some detailed information about the vehicle.

    CRINALE T9-CA5.008 GRAV-TANK
    >est. completion date: 2211


    Viktor then continued "2 of the 3 designs are specially made for the 5th World War. This grav-tank is one of the designs, the other is this."

    The screen changed to a different vehicle, changing the rotating graphic and the information.

    CRINALE I4-XA2.793 JET FIGHTER
    >est. completion date: 2211


    "And finally, the moment you've all been waiting for... and the one design I've had the most fun with!"

    For the last time, the screen changed, showing info for a more recognisable craft.

    CRINALE F0-RA8/00015 F12000 RACE CRAFT
    >est. completion date: 2210-11


    "This craft is to be created specifically for the F12000 AG Racing League, as we will continue to take part in the league after its change from the FX400. I can promise that this will be the best ship ever! All 3 craft will use improved and updated versions of existing Crinale technologies, so we should be able to complete them fairly quickly. The only reason the war craft have a later completion date is due to the fact that we need to make more than just 2, which is the number of F12000 craft that is to be built.

    "Now, this meeting has come to an end. Everyone should know what to do. Bring a new age of anti-gravity craft, GO!"


    Yes, the Sectors are called Sektor, it's actually just the romanization of the Russian translation of the word.

    Also, I'm assuming the war ends in 2215?

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    Default Part 47: Back to Business

    Why do you always write "romanization"? wouldn't it be "transcription", or "transliteration"? Neither Russian, nor English are roman languages.
    Anyway, the war... as always I don't plan such things, but 2015 should be the end (or earlier, before christmas )
    Sooo, Crinale supplies Russia with tanks and warplanes? Or do they want to NRF-like take over the country?
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    Ohh it's getting real

    Quote Originally Posted by Jonny View Post
    Why do you always write "romanization"? wouldn't it be "transcription", or "transliteration"? Neither Russian, nor English are roman languages.
    It's actually the same thing:
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Romanization
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Romanization_of_Russian

    The English language uses the Latin/Roman alphabet

    Quote Originally Posted by Jonny View Post
    2015 should be the end (or earlier, before christmas )
    Wait...

    Quote Originally Posted by Jonny View Post
    Sooo, Crinale supplies Russia with tanks and warplanes? Or do they want to NRF-like take over the country?
    No, and no. Let me explain:

    No, Crinale do not supply Russia with their tanks and jet fighters, they are battling with their own pilots, not with the Russian Air Force. However, they are on the side of the Russians. In other words, Russia effectively have two different forces fighting for them: The Armed Forces of the Russian Empire, and Crinale.

    And no, Crinale do not want to take over the world. Their primary objective is to make the AG Racing Commission Overtel 2.0.

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    Ok, I'm pretty sure that the Russian Tsar would give the captured stuff from Jennter to Criale ^^

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    I could easily work that into the plot, have Crinale obtain Jennter's tech from the Tzar, reverse engineer it, and implement them into the various craft being built.

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    Let's do it like when the Jennter guys came to Brandon and showed him his plans to recapture Jennter from Henry. First you write and then I check.

    Also I made a basic Bovier family tree, things still don't fit and I found mistakes in the plot.
    Nico and Jana are in the 8th generation after Jonny and his great-great-great-great-great-grandchildren
    Still I need to work around with birthdates, Nico and Jana are both in their mid-20s, last version resulted in birthdates for them at the end of the 2180s.

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    Okay! I'm also writing out an FTA part (which means it'll be in 2212) that'll involve Jonny Bovier. I'm sure you'll love it, but you won't see it for a while (for obvious reasons).

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    There is one main issue....

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    What issue?

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    You know h is pretty old and becomes ill...
    I didn't planned that he witnesses 2212...

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    Alrighty, then how about Nico? Since he drives Jonny's "old" RX-7, maybe Brandon mistakes him for Jonny?

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    Wouldn't Brandon know that Jonny is no longer?
    Or do you plan it like in Initial D First Stage, as Takumi won some races and everybody thought it was Bunta?

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    Yeah, I guess he would. Okay, how about this: Since Brandon doesn't see the RX-7 in Nico's possession, Brandon initially catches a glimpse of it, enough for him to think "wait, what?", then he later sees it parked, stops by it and sees that it was Nico driving.

    So, in other words, Brandon gets confused and doesn't know what to think.

    EDIT: Also, could you make up a name of a F12000 circuit? It's to be in Japan.
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    Akina, no wait
    Takisha Anti-Gravity Street Circuit

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    Hmmm, how about Sidewinder?

    Honestly, I'm not sure which one is better of the two names.

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    Sidewinder sounds more like wipEout

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    Is that a good thing? I'm gonna assume it is.

    EDIT: Also, what model is Jonny/Nico's RX-7? Is it the FD3S Jonny used since 2016?

    EDIT2: One more thing, what's your favourite Eurobeat song?
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