Some of you may remember my very old 2002/3 Fusion based fanfic 'Wipeout Of The Hero'. For those that don't, I salute you for avoiding vomiting blood by the bucket load. However, since NaNoWriMo is this month, I thought it was high time to rewrite that piece of [Insert Appropriate Expletive Here] accurately. I want to fix all the plot holes, keep characters IN character and actually turn it into something half readable.

Any help with keeping it accurate and on track would be most appreciated. Here is what I have so far: