You got it, I love that series! :D
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You got it, I love that series! :D
^ I knew it ;)
Btw the actual reason I ended part 4 on a cliff-hanger is because I didn't finish my concept art for the XAF-72 then. But its finally about ready for you to see.
Part 4.2 will be out soon once I am happy with it, I'm going for a truly immersive atmosphere in this part :)
Also I will include secret references in this part to a couple of my favourite games, can you spot them all?? ;)
Neat! I accept your challenge!
Faster Than Angels
Jennterista Racing Chronicles
The Jennter Succession Conflict
Chapter 4/4: Two Faces
29th October 2209
Jennter Enterprises HQ, Copenhagen, Denmark
15:24.19
“Yes, it’s all written out already.” Jonathan stood with Henry Marsson in his office “The documents come into effect as they are on 1st November 2209 at 12 PM. From then on Jana will take over my position.”
Henry mustered the room “And do you keep these documents safe?”
Jonathan nodded “Yep, they are in my lockable desk drawer. Traditional paper, so digital errors can be avoided.”
“I see.” the young man uttered “This is the first time our company goes through a change of leadership.”
The old Bovier smiled “Took way too long. I am very happy this company even lasted until today.”
Henry appeared bewildered, given he only knew a Jennter that was a world leading multinational corporation, but he comforted “I am sure Jana will continue this legacy.”
Jonathan walked towards the door, readying to attend another issue “Ah, Henry.”
Henry followed him “Yes, Jonathan?”
He smiled again, a pure smile, that put a lot of youth into his worn face “I can’t thank you enough for all your support in all these years!”
The other man stopped in the room “Oh...no need to…”
“With you by her side, Jana will soon find the right way in this world.” Jonathan reached to place his hand on Henrys shoulder “I feel like throwing a little gathering soon.”
1st November 2209
11:58.13
A ceremony has been planned. A little resume of the companies history under the leadership of Jonathan and the current projects followed. Jana was also presenting her plans for the near future.
Finally Jonathan was sitting with Henry and Jana by his side again at a table, in front of a crowd and countless cameras on live feed.
“...and within a few minutes, my precious Jana Bovier will become the second President of Jennter Enterprises.” he read from a prepared speech manuscript while reaching out for the official documents that initiate the change of charge in the company.
“As of today, the 1st November 2209, at 12 o’clock Central European Time, Jana Bovier is the sole President of Jennter Enterprises, with all rights and obligations, with the veto power in any lead decisions, which shall only be challenged if her acting violates the ‘Codicem honoris Jennterista’-”
He abruptly stopped after opening the first page.
“This is not real.”
He flipped the pages.
“Why is this seal…”
He turned more pages.
“My signature…”
More pages
“The ink…”
12:00.00
‘The following document singularly transfers the role of President of Jennter Enterprises and all associated positions in personal union from Jonathan Bovier to Henry Marson.’
Jonathan rose out of his chair, pressing his arms into the table “WHAT IS THE MEANING OF THIS, HENRY MARSON!?” he shouted at the man who has been his trusted assistant for seven years.
Henry chuckled.
Jonathan grabbed him by his collar. He may be shorter than the Swede, but in his anger it did not lack him in strength.
Henry laughed and glared into his eyes with a smile that feasted on the rage of an old man “Oh Jonathan, you very well know what powers I possess now.”
He whispered those words, well aware of what could leak through to the public otherwise.
Just as much as he knew all along which technology to use to manipulate paper to his will.
Just as much as he knew all along when he could access Jonathans office.
The fruits of years were ready.
Jonathan pushed Henry down again and let the palm of his hand meet Henrys face with the highest speed he could achieve.
Henry laughed, it was one thing he didn’t care about the world to witness. At this moment, he did not “Security!”
Jonathan has been grabbed by two security guards in Jennter uniform.
Jana, dumbfounded by the surreality of the scene unfolding, finally found words “No! You can’t do that!”
“He did it himself.” Henry threw back.
Jana grabbed the document before Henry could take it.
“Jana Bovier. You hereby are fired. Security!” he spoke to her, while squeezing tight on her lower arm. Lowering the pressure on her arm, Jana dropped the papers and was immediately taken away by two other guards.
Henry collected the document, adjusted his hair and collar to the degree possible and held it towards the crowd, showing the line which marked that he indeed was in charge now.
“I am sorry for the ruckus.” he bowed towards the microphone at his place at the desk where just minutes ago the two Boviers have been sitting. “I noticed that Jonathan Boviers judgement has been clouded the past months. Perhaps he wasn’t quite aware of the things we decided on broader levels. Anyway, I promise Jennter will enter its greatest time soon.”
As such, Henry left the stage and yet again a crowd was put in awe.
That's getting interesting, can't wait for the next part!
Here it is the next instalment to my fan fic, bare in mind the events in this part occur before the final rave at omega harbour.
Also there are two prompts in this part, when you see one please click on the link allocated to the prompt, this is for a immersive atmosphere as you read ;)
-Video1 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hkCMVsGy8Kk
-Video2 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mIMkq7tgjug
Part 4.2: Flying with a dragon
The doors slowly open to hanger 12, from inside the darkness emerges the XAF-72 Wyvern
The audience awes and wonders at the beautiful sight of the sleek aircraft as its pulled behind the podium. David, Falon and Sarah are just inches from it and they to cannot fathom the reality that the aircraft is theirs. All the years of development and testing have proven their worth. David turns to the microphone.
"Well ladies and gentleman there she is, the XAF-72 Wyvern in all her glory and my god isn't she beautiful.....
Right there's no time to lose, I think its about time Falon enters the cockpit."
Falon nods and then the audience applauds him as he slowly approaches the Wyvern, he enters the cockpit......
(Play video1)
David: czzt okay Falon are you ready?
Falon: More ready than I will ever be!
David: Good, then lets begin. We will also have a second pilot flying close by you to monitor the Wyverns progress. His call sign is Razgriz.
Falon: Good to know, lets start. Powering up the FTL Drive now.
The Wyverns engine roar into life, the ailerons begin to sweep and the wings extend outwards.
Falon: Flight preparations complete, engines are at full power.
Razgriz: No anomalies detected.
David speaks into the microphone:
"Falon you are cleared for takeoff!" The audience cheers loudly with a standing ovation.
Falon: Understood, beginning take off sequence.
The Wyvern kicks in its afterburners and slowly gains speed, a beautiful roar is heard from far away as Falon gives all its got on the ground. The Wyvern accelerates rapidly and before anyone can gasp, she takes off into the air.
Falon: We have lift off!
Hats are thrown into the air and people jump in joy. David and Sarah hug each other in celebration, but soon stop after they both think about the holding hands in the elevator previously and now the hug. Rather embarrassed they look away from each other for a moments notice, but end up looking at each other again in a way they did before.
David: well then.
Sarah: umm yeah.
Falon: are you two lovebirds quite done down there, this is a moment for the Wyvern.
David: Oh, duh, of course
Audience member: Awww, we got lovebirds!
David turns away from the crowd in embarrassment as Sarah turns to hide her blushing.
Razgriz: well, well, I knew something would soon come about between them two haha.
Falon: how about I do a BARREL ROLL to regain the purpose of this demonstration?
Razgriz: sounds like a good idea!
Falon dives towards the crowd and ascends rapidly soon afterwards while performing several rolls as he does so. The audience cheers louder than ever before, Falon pulls off several stunts in the Wyvern that were never thought possible such as the Pugachev’s Cobra and several high G load loops. Its an impressive sight to peoples eyes as they cannot unfathomed what they are seeing. Its almost unreal to David.
David: I just can't believe this is happening
Sarah: Its a man-made miracle
Tempted by unknown feelings David grabs Sarah's hand, she doesn't pull away but embraces the kindness for she to has new feelings. 47 minutes pass of the allotted 1 hour and 30 minutes demonstration flight time of the XAF-72. Falon pulls off many stunts and exceeds Mach 3.6 on several runs. People are glued to the sky, everything is going according to plan.
David: Well ladies and gentleman we have tons of time left before the end, any suggestions on Falons next stunt?
The audience shouts out many ideas: Loop de loops! U-turns! and more
David: Okay simmer down lets have one at a time please.
?????: I have a challenge for Falon!
David: who said that?
(stop video1, play video2)
A shadowy figure stands up from the stands
?????: Me!
David: Wait no!, its... its you!
Sarah: Who is it David?
David: Its the man who stole the Wyvern CEFND warp device!
Everybody gasps and moves away from the culprit.
?????: Ah so you do remember me. HAHAHA it will do you no good now, lets have your Wyvern try this challenge then.
The culprit pulls a device from his pocket and activates it. Razgriz's F-15 flashes warning lights as he trails the XAF. "WARNING! WARNING! XAF ANOMALIE DETECTED!!!
Razgriz: Falon you're in danger
Falon: Huh?
Soon the XAF'S dashboard lights up and displays a warning:
Warning! warning! anomalies detected!
Engine power falling, 67% and decreasing
Aileron control failing, powklkf falling fhbvfvbvnv
Emergencybgeedcsdbc landindhyfb fybffhdhfybn
fhdbchdbvn
Crinale overtake in progress, 29% complete
David: How could you do this?!!!
?????: For the greater good of mankind
David when I get my hands on you...
?????: To late
The man disappears from the stands, instantly peoples attention turns to the sky. The XAF has become instable and is losing altitude and power. David runs to the comm unit.
David: Falon are you okay?!!
Falon: I'm fine but the Wyverns computer has been corrupted! there's a virus in the system and its the same one used on the FX-400 Wyvern during the Fort Gale race!
David: NOO! Falon you need to land now!
Razgriz: I'm attempting to remotely clean the virus but it may take some time!
Falon: My engine power is at 49% Altitude 9000 feet and falling. I'm losing control of the ailerons!
David: Razgriz you've got to hurry up!
Razgriz: I'm going as fast as I can, there is a option that can help stop the virus from destroying the Wyvern.
Falon: What is it?!!
Razgriz: Shut down the computer!
Falon: But then I'll lose all control, the Wyvern will stall!
Razgriz: There's no other choice, you'll crash before I clean the virus if you don't shut it down!!!
There's a long pause from Falon..... He then says the unthinkable.
Falon: Shutting down main computer now!
The Wyvern ceases its roar and begins to glide elegantly as the virus has been halted in its tarcks.
David: Razgriz you only have 3 minutes before the Wyvern stalls, you got to hurry!
Razgriz: Okay, scanning now!............... found the miserable bugger!
Falon: HURRY!
Razgriz: Cleaning now! I need two minutes.
Falon: WE DON'T HAVE TWO MINUTES!!
Two minutes elapse.
Razgriz: I did it! the Virus is gone!
David: Excellent, Falon start the Wyvern up.
Falon: IT WON'T RESTART! I'M TRYING AND IT WON'T!
Sarah: DON'T GIVE UP! KEEP TRYING.
The unthinkable happens, the Wyvern stalls and plummets to the Earth. Falon desperately points the nose of the aircraft down to keep the Wyvern stable and as he tries to restart the engines.
Falon: COME ON YOU MISERABLE S**T WORK!!!!
Falon bashes on the computer and it kicks into life!
Falon: I DID IT! WE HAVE CONTROL
Razgriz: You need to level out now!
Falon pulls back on the stick harder than ever before and pulls the nose up. He succeeds and unstalls the Wyvern. The audience cheers graciously as Falon is safe once again.
Falon: Coming in for emergency landing!
The Wyvern lands safely on the runway and emergency vehicles along with David and Sarah rush to the scene. The Wyvern is undamaged but soon bellows out thick black smoke. But Falon isn't hurt and the internal fire is extinguished. David rushes to Falon.
David: Are you hurt!
Falon: No but a little shaky now
David escorts Falon to a ambulance to be sure on his condition.
David: Crinale will pay for this!!!
Phew my hands are on fire :P hope you enjoy this instalment guys.
There are 3 hidden Easter eggs, can you find them? :)
Also the picture of my XAF isn't working right now so I will post it another time :|
Glad you liked it :) my hands were burning afterwards haha
You answered 2/3 references correctly well done
3. Razgriz- A squadron of elite pilots from Ace Combat 5, but that was the hardest one ;)
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Finally got the image to upload but there is the XAF in all its glory. I spent hours of my free time doing this so I hope you like the XAF-72 Wyvern
2/3 ain't bad.
That ship looks great!
Good work, did you...animated it?